Thursday, August 14, 2008

Draft



*poof!*

3 Comments:

Blogger Collin said...

I'm of two minds on this one. I love it, but I think it's too long. I'm wondering if it would work better as a prose poem. I'm not even sure where I would make cuts. It's amazing how much you got out of the film and into the poem. I'm really impressed.

12:59 AM  
Blogger greg rappleye said...

Thanks, Colin.

The poem has been cut (about 40 lines) but it may need more.

8:15 AM  
Blogger Robert said...

Ha! I saw it just before it went poof! I love the surprising way the movie and and the painting come together.

12:07 PM  

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