Wednesday, August 13, 2008

Draft of a New Poem




*poof!*

2 Comments:

Blogger Collin said...

I like it.

Not sure why you need the exclamation point after creek.

Also, I'd take "the" before holiday cease-fires.

8:08 PM  
Blogger greg rappleye said...

Good thinking.
Thanks.

9:20 PM  

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