Thursday, June 26, 2008

Last Call




*poof!*



I think that one is okay.

Every once in a while, I find it useful to prove to myself that I can write a poem that is not about hummingbirds.

1 Comments:

Blogger Bigby P. Wolf said...

Hi, Greg. I met you at your reading at IUSB. Been reading the blog regularly ever since.

Anyway...I really like this revision. The couplets especially work for me.

8:01 PM  

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